Final Assessment

Dear Kim,
In spite of your continous technical problems you have posted some nice assignments. You need to get used to using the spell check because you have difficulties with spelling and mechanics (capital letters and punctuation). This is a simple skill that will improve your writing tremendously. Your English is very fluent. Well done!
Your final grade is 85.
Yours,
Karen Noll Stanger

enter the book

Enter the book:
If i was part of a story for a week i would pack......
1. I would pack allot of sweets so me & Claire could eat it all up & have fun.
2.i would pack cloths.
3. I would take money so we could go shopping & it would cheer Claire up.
4.I would take medication (because i get sick very often :]////)
5. I would pack lots & lots of tissue (in case Claire or her mum get sad).
6. I would take a phone(to be in touch).
7.I would pack a brush & tooth brush.

diary

Diary :
10/5/09
Dear diary:
now 14 days 28 min & 8 seconds after my mothers death i decided to believe that my mums death is because of me ,maybe i didn't put enough pressure on her, maybe because i didn't take it seriously.
I'm scared mummy i need you & every time i look at the door of your bed room i fink i hear you mum ,& every time i go for a walk with Ellen i think i see you waving at me from the window.
Am i going crazy?
I fink Jason thinks I'm a Loony & the only reason he didn't break with me is that he pi
ttys me.
Maybe Ellen thinks that I'm also a loony?
I feel like the world is spinning with everyone inside it but I'm the only one that's not spinning with it.
I wish mum could read this and respond.



12/5/09
Dear diary:
I Had a weired dream it was about mum she was alive i could touch her.
There is a party today & Jason wants to take me but i don't know if i want to go should i?


12/5/09-13/5/09
Dear diary its almost 13/5 & i went to the party & i had allot of fun.
Maybe Jason does love & so does Ellen i think fings are starting to come back together!